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Hello,Could you please to proofread and edit my personal statement essay. ThanksMy name is Myanganzaya. I was born 1989. I live in UB because came to learn in university of Information and Communication Technology. My family live in khowd jargalant country side.I was born and raised in the beautiful country of Mongolian, which is located in the Central Asia. I finished High School there and attended ten-year. This is my fifth semester here. Now I feel more confident about myself, because I passed all courses that I have been taking and received good grades and try to do my best to keep doing it.I'm a very honest and friendly person. In addition I like science, arts and music, especially classical music and I love to read very much. My favourite music is pop. I can dancing very well. I enjoy reading interesting books, watching action movies, hanging out with my friends. I like to play on piano, to play big tennis and go to the gym. Unfortunately, I don't have much time to hanging out with my friends now, because I sacrificed my free time to learn. But it worth it in order to be proud of myself in the future and achieve my goal. I really like this school and the I have chosen this school among the others. I'm trying to do my best to study hard and to make good grades, because education is very important to me. My personality is one of my best assests. I'am funny, outgoing and genuinly care about other people. The thing I dislike I have a hard time expressing my emotions, or letting people in on what is bothering me because I assume that gives them the power to hurt me. And I don't like for anyone to see me cry. I hold back a lot and I don't like that about me.
Advanced Telecommunication infrastructure has played an important role in both social and economic development of local communities. Modern Telecommunications infrastructure has created both positive and negative effects on local communities. ‘Advances in Telecommunication has been a two-way street for rural areas. Although enhanced telecommunications services increase a rural community’s access to information, and help rural businesses serve non-local markets, but it also makes it easier for urban firms to capture and serve rural market, thus inhibiting local rural development.’
Without the new telecommunication infrastructures local communities are not having the prosperity and opportunities that advances in telecommunications bring. Telecommunications infrastructure has helped rural communities in creating social and economic development, by linking rural regions with urban communities, and services. Telecommunication advances has played an important role in boosting and improving product quality and services in rural businesses, as many successful rural businesses today depend on high technical quality of services and equipments. Throughout the history telecommunications technology has been s


Advances in telecommunication has played an active role in encouraging a better quality of life, interconnectivity in society, interconnectivity of equipments throughout communities. Local Communities often lack the ability to support important institutional serviced such as schools health fields due to the high quality costs and diminishing tax base (Harris & Fulton, 1997). Throughout history telecommunications have been proved in having an important role in making better medical services.
Telecommunication advances has played an active role in both social fabric and economic development of local communities. Advances in telecommunications offers distinctive opportunities to both enhance and hinder rural social and economic development. Enhanced telecommunications infrastructure increases productivity in business development, a free flow of information, interconnectivity in community, and helps rural businesses serve non-local markets, however, it also makes it easier for urban firms to access and serve rural market, thus inhibiting local rural development. Therefore, local communities have been both benefited and weakened by the modern telecommunications technologie.