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Hello,Could you please to proofread and edit my personal statement essay. ThanksMy name is Myanganzaya. I was born 1989. I live in UB because came to learn in university of Information and Communication Technology. My family live in khowd jargalant country side.I was born and raised in the beautiful country of Mongolian, which is located in the Central Asia. I finished High School there and attended ten-year. This is my fifth semester here. Now I feel more confident about myself, because I passed all courses that I have been taking and received good grades and try to do my best to keep doing it.I'm a very honest and friendly person. In addition I like science, arts and music, especially classical music and I love to read very much. My favourite music is pop. I can dancing very well. I enjoy reading interesting books, watching action movies, hanging out with my friends. I like to play on piano, to play big tennis and go to the gym. Unfortunately, I don't have much time to hanging out with my friends now, because I sacrificed my free time to learn. But it worth it in order to be proud of myself in the future and achieve my goal. I really like this school and the I have chosen this school among the others. I'm trying to do my best to study hard and to make good grades, because education is very important to me. My personality is one of my best assests. I'am funny, outgoing and genuinly care about other people. The thing I dislike I have a hard time expressing my emotions, or letting people in on what is bothering me because I assume that gives them the power to hurt me. And I don't like for anyone to see me cry. I hold back a lot and I don't like that about me.
Advanced Telecommunication infrastructure has played an important role in both social and economic development of local communities. Modern Telecommunications infrastructure has created both positive and negative effects on local communities. ‘Advances in Telecommunication has been a two-way street for rural areas. Although enhanced telecommunications services increase a rural community’s access to information, and help rural businesses serve non-local markets, but it also makes it easier for urban firms to capture and serve rural market, thus inhibiting local rural development.’
Without the new telecommunication infrastructures local communities are not having the prosperity and opportunities that advances in telecommunications bring. Telecommunications infrastructure has helped rural communities in creating social and economic development, by linking rural regions with urban communities, and services. Telecommunication advances has played an important role in boosting and improving product quality and services in rural businesses, as many successful rural businesses today depend on high technical quality of services and equipments. Throughout the history telecommunications technology has been s


Advances in telecommunication has played an active role in encouraging a better quality of life, interconnectivity in society, interconnectivity of equipments throughout communities. Local Communities often lack the ability to support important institutional serviced such as schools health fields due to the high quality costs and diminishing tax base (Harris & Fulton, 1997). Throughout history telecommunications have been proved in having an important role in making better medical services.
Telecommunication advances has played an active role in both social fabric and economic development of local communities. Advances in telecommunications offers distinctive opportunities to both enhance and hinder rural social and economic development. Enhanced telecommunications infrastructure increases productivity in business development, a free flow of information, interconnectivity in community, and helps rural businesses serve non-local markets, however, it also makes it easier for urban firms to access and serve rural market, thus inhibiting local rural development. Therefore, local communities have been both benefited and weakened by the modern telecommunications technologie.

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1.Текстээ уншина
2, Өгүүлбэр өгүүлбэрээ салгана
3, Өгүүлбэрээ тодорхойлно
4, тод гишүүдийг олно
5, Эзэн биеийг олно
6,Үйл үгээ олно
7,Ямар цаг дээр байгааг олно
8,Мэдэхгүй үгээ орчуулна
9,Найруулж бичнэ
10,Өмнөх өгүүлбэртээ холбоно
11, Нийлүүлж цогцолбор болгон бичнэ
12, орчуулснаа уншина
13,алдаатай байвал засна
14,Дахин хянан уншина
15,Орчуулсан текстээ бичнэ


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7. To determine the what time
8. Translate new words
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13.Fixed to mistakes
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in a word (0) of microwave ovens, e-mail and ephemeral fashion, we maintain our traditional stance (1) for quality and value for money. Call us old- fashioned , we see it (2) as a compliment, but around here the customer is always rigth. After nearly half a century in the fashion industry, we feel we have the (3) rigth to boast that we khow exactly what the busy, modern woman wants (4) in her closet (5) altough her role of mum in the kitchen (6) migth have expanded to mum in the workplace, we still know how to dress women in clothes that look great, but don't cost an arm and a leg. Our motto has always been beauty . fit and quality in affordable clothes. We (7) are of the opinion that if something isn't broken then it shoudn't be fixed. We keep old favourit and give them a dright new look aech season to (8) keep you looking up-to-date and stylish. (9) when you are driving the kids to a biigame or presiding over a board meeting, our line of women's apparel is styled and sewn with your confidence and comfort in (10) mine . Our clothes are made of the (11) of fabrics and are all easy care, so you'll (12) never have the extra task of running to the dry cleaners. (13) in designing our attractive line of clothing, we are thinking about the mature, 30-something woman that you have (14) become Because of this, we add those discreet folds and pleatsto enhance the natural beauty of your body. (15) unlike other clothes manufacturers, who attempt to drape the more lady in clothes suited for teenegers we alliw you to take pride in the person you are.

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US Post Codes
The American Zip code, devised in (0) response to changing (16) postal needs, has been around for some time. Between 1900 and the year of its (17) inroduse the quantity and nature of US mail changes. Its volume increased by 900% and most of it became business, rather than personal, (18) substance An acronym for Zoning Improvement Ptn, the Zip system speeds up the sorting and delivering of mail, especially
bilk mail. (19 ) brief, it consists of five numbers after the address. The first digit identifies one of ten broad (20) geocraphical areas. The next two numbers designate a metropolitan area or sectional centre. The final two numbers stand for a small town or delivery unit from which the mail is distributed. For instance, in 22207, the intial number is area 2, (21) corresponding the District of Columbi, Maryland, North Carolina, South Carolina, Virgina and West Virgina; the following 22 is the Arlington district of carolina, Virginia, and 07 is the local area. In 1983, an (22) optional nine - numbered Zip code was inroduced. Business mailers with large vilumes of post can use this code, receiving a (23) ...................................... discount on their mailing rate. In addition, as early as 1963, when the Zip code itself was devised, two- letter abbrevations for states and other areas were brougth in, to (24 ) unable the mechanised addressing system used by many companies to (25) economise on time by putting a Zip code on the same line as the city or state.

business letter

To: Elba electronics

From:Number 28-511, NUHT Han-Uul district, Ulaanbaatar, Mongolia

2009.10.27

Dear Sir
My name is EM. I studying of Information technology 3 rd of cours. I bougth a attena from your company 1 day ago. But today our TV dont work. So i look antenna it hasn't worked.

So i want to talk your manager.

Please exchange the antenna to same a good give my payment return. Mhank you for your time and reading my reguest.
Please contact me

Sincerely.
Enkhtaivan Mynganzaya
............................. Student

Abstract NGN service

Abstract NGN service
Although it is difficult to predict what the next killer applications will be, we can inter the types of service characteristics and capabilities that will be important in the NGN enviroment by exammining current service related industry trentls. It is certainly true that we are moving from Time division mytiplex /TDM/ based circuit switched networks to pakcet all and fjame based networks. However these changes in the transport networks are merely enablers for the dramatic changes we will see at the service level These services tended to involve nartow band voice calls with a single point to point connection per call.
NGN service is we khow characteristic is ;
- Ubiquitions real time, multimedia communications
- More personal intelligence distributed throughout the network
- More network intelligence distributed throughout the network
- More simplicity for nsers etc.
And we dont khow characteristics
- Specialized resourse services
- Processing and storage services
- Multimedia services
- Virtual private Networks
- Public network compuing etc.
Conclution;
Although it is difficult to predict what the next killer lists service characteristics and capabilities that will be important in the NGN evironment based on service related industry trends. It also describes a number of services we currently believe in the NGN environment
What attributes should a next
Ceneration service Architecture process?
One of the primary goals of NGN-s is to provide a common unified and flexible service architecture that can support multiole types of services and management applications over multiple types of transport This paper describedthree critical attributes of this Next Generation service
Architecture.


Reference letter.
Enkhtaivan Myanganzaya.
School of information and tell communication technology.
Nuhkt 28-511, 6-th corral , Khan- Uul , UB Mongolia
To; "Information and tell communication Network Company"
Myanganzaya.E is a very hard working. A she is a teacher . I have seen many skills her . I think Myanganzaya is applying to the student exchange programm at you company
Myanganzaya knowledge English speak and written and use of computers programm. She is reliable confident and hard working And she ability organize to functions
If your company is to take on work her. I thinkshe is a can very good working
Sincerely
her English teacher Bayarmaa.G


Cover letter
Enkhtaivan Myanganzaya
Nukht 28-511,6- th carrol, Khan-Uul UB Mongolia
20 September 2009
Dear; "Information and tell communication net work company"
- I stud 3-rd couse in shool of Information and telecommunication technology. I have a good student and studying a very good I will graduated in 2011 . So at tell I want to work in your company. Because your company is Mongolian best company.
- I have working with group and I excellent skill deside problems use of computers programm and knowledge english speak and written
- If you to take on work me You are dont to regret. It is believe
I look ward to hearing from you
Your sincerely
Myanganzaya.E

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1.Read in general
2.Try to find the meaning
3.Find the subject
4.Find the verb
5.Separete the words in senteces
6.Look up the regular verbs
7.Find the new words
8. Write the words and use dictionery
9. Change the words
10.Edit the meaning with conjuction
11.Edit the meaning from the backof sentence
12. Put the conjuction words in correct
13. Find the perpect meaning
14. Make sure the mistake
15. copy the translation on the paper wich is ready